I'll stop updating my journal again and return to my once-a-month after this. If you're reading Persephone, please give this a look. If not, then.... why are you here?? It's only free to read until I'm done with it!

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This is the first chapter of Persephone. Only 1 person other than I has read this version, but it's up there, and posted for everyone.
This version is a bit darker, a little more reference to rape, and an added beach scene. It's basically the same, the story still makes sense if all you saw was one of the first two postings. But I tried to be more despcriptive during the whole Get in The Bath? thing.

I think the reason I keep changing it (well, not changing it, I mean editing it) is because I'm dead serious about it. I want this done, perfect, and published.

And each chapter will end up with five or six versions, just watch. o.o

I've found that the trick to writing is very simple. Fragments. Use them. A lot of them. Makes things interesting. Yes, your English teacher is wroooong. Fragments. C:

Anyway, for those that want to see a guy who looks like how I imagine August, look no further than Rob!
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God he is adorable. Good morning, baby chicken!
Just imagine his hair lying down like he didn't just get out of the shower and you should be good.



And almost forgot, fff. My club!